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 Deaths Breath

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Haley the Harbinger

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PostSubject: Re: Deaths Breath   Tue Jul 16, 2013 5:12 am

Well-penned, I really liked the emotion in this piece. :)
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PostSubject: Deaths Breath   Mon Jul 15, 2013 4:42 am

The cold blood flowed through his veins,
his heart left in pain.

Her misty eyes stained,  
to remember his name.

For destiny did not allow his life's last cry,
as she pierced through the darkness with a lovers eye.

A meaningless lovers gain,
within a thousand needles of pain.

Only to remember all she knows,
for a moment then it goes.

Like the thunder that blows,
from deaths black rose.

He was destined to die,
in the midnight hour he would lie,
a lifeless limb never to fly.

She's left alone,
in a place that is not her own.
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